the beach, in love
waves come and go
deep into the hollow between
my cells i swallow
the quick caress allowed
and quicker than being in me
you return to the sea
disappear into air
recurl cloud and refill me
with swallows all over
the thrust of your body
i inhale, dense
with your element i believe
in solidity/ not a single grain
b lown away in hurricane,
but a shore, an island ,a continent
sailing in chasms carved
by you filled with you.
natalka helped me fix it.
waves come and go each
a caress allowed
deep into the hollows between
my cells, i swallow
you as quickly as i can but you
move quicker, back to the sea.
up into air. recursive you refill me.
differently each time
the thrust of your wet body
inhaled into interstices
unaware of being, i am dense
with your element
believe in solidity/ am not a single
grain blown away in hurricane,
but a shore, an island ,a continent sailing
in chasms carved by you
filled with you.
deep into the hollow between
my cells i swallow
the quick caress allowed
and quicker than being in me
you return to the sea
disappear into air
recurl cloud and refill me
with swallows all over
the thrust of your body
i inhale, dense
with your element i believe
in solidity/ not a single grain
b lown away in hurricane,
but a shore, an island ,a continent
sailing in chasms carved
by you filled with you.
natalka helped me fix it.
2 Comments:
i like the tweaked version, a lot!
thanks tasha, so do i. wish i could that help on all my poems. lol.
new issue of font3 coming out sunday, do you have a poem i can include?
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